Before we dive into the review of the dog house lets get the credits out of the way. To start I’d like to give credit to team over at Saatchi & Saatchi and the execs and Penny’s for rolling this commercial out. The commercial was actually directed by the Emmy award winning Bryan Buckley. If your not familiar with his work that’s ok because you really have to be a ad junky to actually know who directs these things. Still you’ve scene his work if you saw Ellen’s Amex commercials or the classic Bud commercial with Will Ferrell which made its way around the at least 35% of the internet.
See It Now:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Twivg7GkYts
www.livemoo.com (bottom of the page)

And now for the actual review: Brilliant, I’m giving this AD 4.5 out of 5 Mouses. I’ll get into why it didn’t get the highly coveted complete 5th mouse later.
The commercial is flat out one of the best professional pieces of online commercial works I’ve scene in years. What makes this commercial work is the witty writing, high quality production, comedic value, understanding of the medium for which it was to be distributed, not overly hawking products and actually being able to pull of a full plot in less then 5 minutes.
The internet is famous for funny, but effective plot development is actually a rare occurrence. The commercial weaves plot from the very beginning to the end. Beware of the DogHouse quickly dives into satire when a husband attempts to give his wife a duel bag vacuum cleaner. Our hero quickly goes into shock as his wife proceeds to walk him outside to the dog house, once in the dog house he is thrown into the underworld of husband hell. From the second our hero enters the dog house he is educated on how he wronged his wife and is shown the errors of his ways while he’s forced to due laundry and eat quiche for dinner. The question of how do you get out of the dog house is answered cleverly when we he sees a picture of a happy wife wearing a fine piece of jewelry. Social Media Note: No mention of Penny’s and no verbal mention of Jewelry is made and by the way I’m sure you can still buy a duel bag vacuum at Penny’s.
Throughout the commercial we see occasional flashes of the Jewelry, however most people wont figure out who the commercial is for until the very end and even then I think some people might not see who sponsored this ad. Really this is the only problem with the commercial. I actually think they did not promote the J.C. Penny brand enough at the end and that’s all I have to say about that.
The use of wit and comedy weaved into a story about being in the dog house during the holiday’s for bad gift choices is a fantastic theme and in this dog house economy that we find ourselves in today I’d suggest bonuses for all those involved in this commercial. Really, take care of people who do work like this.
Social Network Police - I certainly don’t proclaim to be a member of the SNPD, but I can tell you that this commercial follows many of the un written laws of our new medium. When you actually go out and produce a video like this the last thing you want to do is over sell your products in the commercial. Second, and for me the most important rule is witty writing that actually captivates the audience. I’d hate to spend 100k on high production value and not have solid writing holding the lights and audio equipment together.
Real Impact:
I’m a big fan of letting these commercials find me and this one happened to make its way in a sea of Twitter messages last week, it washed up on my Twitter beach last Tuesday. Anyway, a few day’s passed and the Sunday paper arrived…having 2 small children, launching a new company and being a religious follower of the Minnesota Vikings meant I wasn’t able to actually read the paper until nearly Monday, still I sat down to read the paper I actually came across a J.C. Penny Ad, and for the first time since I left the great state of Minnesota I opened up a Penny’s ad. I’m serious that weekly ad never before made its way into my mix of the business, sports, travel and electronic ads before.
The Close:
In closing, this ad set out to sell Jewelry, brand J.C. Penny’s in a new way and entertain the viewer. Well as fair as I’m concerned, they did all of that and more.
Dave Dabbah
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through Competitive Intelligence
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